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How To Fix A Broken Ad

Have you placed an ad online that did not deliver the results you expected? It happens to us all, and it’s frustrating!

We do what the books and seminars say to do — find the right advertising source, write the best ad we can, pay our money and hope for the best.

And then nothing happens.

Disappointing to say the least.

Disappointing and destructive.

Disappointing because we lost money.  Destructive because we can easily believe the biggest lie of all — this Internet thing won’t work for me.  It might work for others, but not for me.

Or worse yet, that it’s your fault!

The good news is this: Broken ads can be fixed.

Your lost money (and morale) can be redeemed.  And you can do this starting today!

As I am writing this I have been a copywriter online for about 13 years. In that time I’ve written more ads than I can count.

That doesn’t mean I’m a “guru” — it just means I have experience. 🙂

Allow me to share with you the steps I take to fix a broken ad.

Use these steps and you just might be able to turn a loss into a gain and a losing ad into a winner as well.

Step 1 – Fix The Headline

The headline is an ad for the ad.

In many cases the headline is all your reader will look at.

It is what convinces people to read your ad and possibly take action. So it needs to be strong.

The #1 reason that ads fail, in my opinion, is a weak headline.

So, how can you write a killer headline?

By adding emotion!

The ONLY thing you need to convey in the headline is what the reader will get if they do what you want them to do.

That’s called a benefit and answers the burning “what’s in it for me?” question that they are asking in their mind.

Think of it this way: we are on an elevator together and you have exactly five seconds to tell me why I should spend my valuable time on your site — to tell me what I get in exchange for my time.

What ONE THING would you tell me?

That is your starting headline.  I say starting because you will probably improve it overtime.

Step 2 – Get To The Point

Don’t you hate those ads that ramble on, telling you everything except what you want to know?

Everyone does, yet most ads fit this category.

Your ad must get to the point.

When writing ads punctuation and grammar don’t matter very much. Perfect English (or the language of your ad) doesn’t matter much either.

What DOES matter is that you convey your main point in an emotional way and make the reader want to know more.

HINT: Remember this — people buy what they want more often than they buy what they need.

Of course, your ad must make sense when read in the language of the reader, so read your ad aloud.

Listen to your ad.

Why do this? Because most of us read by speaking the words in our mind. So, in a very real way, your prospect will be “hearing” your ad.

Now that you have read your ad out loud, did that make you want to go to your site and learn more?

If not it’s time to keep refining. You will get there!

If yes you have the start of a killer ad.

Step 3 – Benefits – benefits – benefits

I’ll bet you’ve heard this before . You must speak in benefits, not features.

Put simply, a feature is what your product does and a benefit is what it does for me.

Here’s an example benefit statement:

“The Directory of Ezines helps people save time when buying solo ads.”

  • It’s not our list of ezines that matters.
  • It’s not that we update every day that matters.
  • It’s not even that I work with members to help them succeed that matters.

Saving time is what matters to people who buy a membership.

They could use Google and struggle for days to find the right ezine, and then waste more time finding out if they even sell ads and for how much.

Or they can buy a membership and know right now which lists match their offer.

See the difference?

What we sell is more time with your family, more time for yourself, more time to work on your business —not just a Directory of Ezines.

Do this: make a list of all the benefits of your offer and then make sure that you cram as many as you can in your ad.

If your ad ends up looking like nothing but a list of benefits- GREAT!

That’s the goal.

Step 4 – Fix The Call To Action

How many ads have you read that end with the simple phrase “click here”

I know, I read them too.  And most of these ads fail miserably.

Want to know why?

Because the phrase “click here” is a momentum killer.

You work your fingers to the bone to create a hot headline that draws the reader into the body of the ad.

Then you pummel them senseless with benefits that raise their blood pressure and get them reaching for their credit card.

Then you tell them to simply “click here”.

Kind of like a cold shower, isn’t it?

The call to action should continue to excite them.

And the best way to do that is to use a phrase that includes your main benefit as well as asking them to click.

Let me say that again. You ARE asking them to click but doing so in a way that makes them know that they will get that big benefit by clicking now.

Here’s a sample.

If you sell a time saving product “Click here to begin saving time today!” is so much better than “click here”

See the difference?

Step 5- Track Every Ad

This won’t make your ads stronger, but it will make your business stronger.  So, please, track every ad.

Why?

Because the problem might not be the ad – it might be your site or the traffic source you are using!

When an ad get clicks but no sales are made the problem is your site (or the source of the traffic) not the ad.

The job of the ad is to get clicks, not make sales.  The job of your site is to make the sale.

I hear this often: “I ran an ad and got 73 clicks but didn’t make any sales, so what’s wrong with my ad?”

The answer is often “nothing.”

THIS IS IMPORTANT: The job of the ad is to get clicks, not to make sales.

The more you remember that while writing your ad the better your ad will perform.

Your ads should be magical.

They should romance the reader into responding, making only promises that you can keep and speaking about benefits that readers want and that make them respond.

If you have a broken ad now, take heart.  Your ad can be fixed, your hope in an online business redeemed, and your wallet fattened.

All it takes is a little work and, like most things in life, never giving up!

By all means, keep writing and refining. When you do you will create what I call a “killer” ad – an ad that works over and over again for years.

And when you have that you will have a beautiful thing indeed!

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Happily married for 43 years, Charlie is the dad to two wonderful daughters. He is the author of 12 books on Internet marketing and creator of over 15 membership sites. You can see all Charlie offers using this link Click Here

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Panicos Varnava

Hi Charlie,

Nice, simply put and to the point! That’s what I like about reading your emails, no fluff and filler just useful content.

Well done, again Cahrlie
Panicos

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hagar

exactly true in all particulars! Quite often, folks forget that the ad is the END of pre-qualifying readers for your product; whatever sends the traffic (article, video, website referral) is the beginning of sorting “cold’ traffic from “interested” buyers.
Great article!

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Mike G.

Another great post Charlie, with good and useful information. Thanks!

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Sudhakar

Sure,I would like to take advantage of all the benefits you provide for members of directory of Ezines, one day.

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Mark Mansfield

Great stuff as usual Charlie. I always enjoy reading the info you give out freely.
Thanks

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Don

Another winner, Charlie. Your efforts are always appreciated.

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Billy

Thank You Charlie,

Your clear thinking
and explanation of
SUCEEDING ONLINE”
turns a beginner into
a complete network marketer.

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Linda Toussaint

I do not like to read but It is just two days since I found you and I cannot leave my computer just reading your material. It has been made simple and easy to understand and there is so much lessons very useful and important to grow your business. You are a God send, I have been struggling but now I have found a mentor from God. Thank you Mr. Charlie Page.

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Lou

Hey Charlie nice post. I really enjoyed how you broke down each section of the ad. I’m thinking after reading this, I might go out and try an ad copy with just a list of benefits 🙂

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Tony

Tremendous article from you Charlie, I always enjoy reading your work

Have a great day

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Lane

What a great article! Now here is my question. I had you create an ad that did not perform well and I need to know how to fix that. I have all the data that I can share with you.

I am interested in fixing it.

Lane Bowers

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